Comments on: lolikit writes fanfic: A Wonderful Sisterhood, Part 1 http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/ Five Words: You Can't Censor My Love Fri, 13 Apr 2012 14:31:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Baka-Raptor http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34353 Baka-Raptor Sat, 17 Jan 2009 02:32:16 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34353 <strike>Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa</strike> I am a retarded cat. Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I am a retarded cat.

]]> By: lolikitsune http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34342 lolikitsune Sat, 17 Jan 2009 01:08:49 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34342 @<a href="#comment-34297" rel="nofollow">CJ</a>: fucking dzu. @<a href="#comment-34338" rel="nofollow">IcyStorm</a>: how is there more realistic crossover fanfic?! @CJ: fucking dzu.

@IcyStorm: how is there more realistic crossover fanfic?!

]]> By: IcyStorm http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34338 IcyStorm Sat, 17 Jan 2009 00:42:25 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34338 My story didn't suck. YOU suck. Oh, and I'm writing a more realistic crossover fanfic. Like digitalboy, I find Yumi OOC. But fuck him for thinking something sexual would happen. My story didn’t suck. YOU suck.

Oh, and I’m writing a more realistic crossover fanfic.

Like digitalboy, I find Yumi OOC. But fuck him for thinking something sexual would happen.

]]> By: CJ http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34297 CJ Fri, 16 Jan 2009 20:21:09 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34297 Memories of Rule 14 are returning. @_@;; Anyway, nice job overall, though I can't comment on OOC-ness cuz I'm not familiar with the characters ^__^;; Kawaii is kawaii, and the dialogue is nicely done, though there seems to be a few awkward bits... like "Touko grimaced, but her grimace was quickly replaced..." Repeating 'grimace' just seemed a bit awkward, idk. Also, you did tsuzuku wrong. つづく Memories of Rule 14 are returning. @_@;;

Anyway, nice job overall, though I can’t comment on OOC-ness cuz I’m not familiar with the characters ^__^;; Kawaii is kawaii, and the dialogue is nicely done, though there seems to be a few awkward bits… like “Touko grimaced, but her grimace was quickly replaced…” Repeating ‘grimace’ just seemed a bit awkward, idk.

Also, you did tsuzuku wrong. つづく

]]> By: lolikitsune http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34287 lolikitsune Fri, 16 Jan 2009 19:19:38 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34287 @<a href="#comment-34285" rel="nofollow">TheBigN</a>: thanks :) Yeah he had the idea last night, and I was like "ok, I'll write that in the morning if you don't!" Then he wrote it, but it sucked, so here I am. @TheBigN: thanks :) Yeah he had the idea last night, and I was like “ok, I’ll write that in the morning if you don’t!” Then he wrote it, but it sucked, so here I am.

]]> By: lolikitsune http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34286 lolikitsune Fri, 16 Jan 2009 19:18:47 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34286 @<a href="#comment-34284" rel="nofollow">digitalboy</a>: Yumi is totally in character, this is her in the presence of someone who puts no pressure on her! :D Sexual happenings? In my SISTERHOOD? Fuck you. @digitalboy: Yumi is totally in character, this is her in the presence of someone who puts no pressure on her! :D

Sexual happenings? In my SISTERHOOD? Fuck you.

]]> By: TheBigN http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34285 TheBigN Fri, 16 Jan 2009 19:18:12 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34285 Props to IcyStorm for the idea, and you for writing it out. I like it. :3 Though I do think that Touko is a little more... sullen (?) than she usually is. digitalboy: It's not that type of story, if that's what your looking for. Props to IcyStorm for the idea, and you for writing it out. I like it. :3

Though I do think that Touko is a little more… sullen (?) than she usually is.

digitalboy: It’s not that type of story, if that’s what your looking for.

]]> By: digitalboy http://not.dotq.org/2009/01/16/lolikit-writes-fanfic-a-wonderful-sisterhood-part-1/#comment-34284 digitalboy Fri, 16 Jan 2009 19:17:12 +0000 http://not.dotq.org/?p=1512#comment-34284 I'm not really sure what to say... lots of expository dialog, and Yumi seems at least mildly OOC... I thought for sure something sexual would happen >_> maybe volume 2? In any case, this is a strange crossover and certainly reads like one : p I’m not really sure what to say… lots of expository dialog, and Yumi seems at least mildly OOC… I thought for sure something sexual would happen >_> maybe volume 2? In any case, this is a strange crossover and certainly reads like one : p

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